Question

7．目前，網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲吸引了大量的年輕人，尤其是中學(xué)生的關(guān)注．人們對該游戲的利于弊看法不一，請你根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文．

好處	壞處	你的觀點(diǎn)（至少兩點(diǎn)）
使自己放松	對視力不好，影響休息，影響學(xué)習(xí)	…
結(jié)識很多網(wǎng)友，有助于交流	有些網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲充滿了血腥和暴力（blood and violence）	…
…	…

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)100詞左右．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．
Nowdays  net game is popular among young people，especially middle school students．Here are some views about net game．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Some people think  net game is good for us． 一些人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲?qū)ξ覀冇泻锰帲?br />句中"net game is good for us"為賓語從句，句中短語"be good for…"意為"對…有好處"
高分句型二：
But we should control ourselves，don't  spend too much time playing net games．但是我們應(yīng)該控制自己，不要在玩游戲上花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間．
句中涉及到短語"spend+時(shí)間+（in） doing sth"，意為"在…上花費(fèi)多長時(shí)間"．

解答 Nowdays  net game is popular among young people，especially middle school students．Here are some views about net game．（開篇點(diǎn)題）
Some people think  net game is good for us．【高分句型一】On the one hand，it can make us relaxed，on the other hand，we can make many friends online．It helps us communicate with others．However，some people disagree．They think net game is bad for our eyes．Many children have to wear glasses for this reason．What's worse，some of them don't pay attention to their studies any more．They spend much time playing net games．And some net games are full of blood and violence．It is harmful for our health．（敘述觀點(diǎn)）
In my opinion，net game is relaxing．In a way，it can help us a lot．But we should control ourselves，don't  spend too much time playing net games．【高分句型二】（發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)）

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