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8．根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入所要完成的回信內(nèi)．所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用．請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名．
假如你叫張毅，最近和美國(guó)筆友Tom通過(guò)郵件談?wù)摳髯缘膶W(xué)校生活，他想了解你的最難忘的一節(jié)課．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件．
提示詞語(yǔ)：unforgettable（ 難忘的），interesting，excited

To          Tom From       Zhang Yi Subject     An unforgettable lesson Hi!Tom， I'm glad to hear from you．      ． Yours， Zhang Yi

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，①at the beginning of the lesson，I didn't know②how to teach，so the classroom ③was full of silence．然而，在課的開始，我不知道如何教，所以教室里充滿了沉默．
①at the beginning of 在…的開始
②疑問(wèn)詞+不定式結(jié)構(gòu)在句子中作賓語(yǔ)．
③be full of"充滿"
高分句型二：
Not only can it expands my teaching experience，but it will improve my English．它不僅可以擴(kuò)大我的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，而且會(huì)提高我的英語(yǔ)水平．
Not only…but （also）不但…而且，連接前后兩個(gè)對(duì)等的成分；前一個(gè)句子采用主謂倒裝，后一個(gè)句子不到裝，also可以省略．

解答 One possible version：
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad to hear from you．
    To everyone，they always come across many different things every day，so they will forget these things easily．But to me，there is one thing making me unforgettable．
    Last Saturday，I went to a primary school to teach English．This was my first lesson in my life and I felt very excited at that time．And I was not nervous．However，at the beginning of the lesson，I didn't know how to teach，so the classroom was full of silence．【高分句型一】Fortunately，I concentrated on the lesson very soon．In fact，I thought there were still many problems in the lesson．After class，the English teacher of this school gave me some advice．I believed they would be helpful to me in the future．【我最難忘的課及過(guò)程】
Through the lesson，I realize that pratice is very important．Not only can it expands my teaching experience，but it will improve my English．【高分句型二】I believe all the time"Where there is a will，there is a way"．【我的感受】
Yours，
Zhang Yi

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題實(shí)際是應(yīng)用文寫作，所給材料較為詳細(xì)，注意不能遺漏要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容可知要用簡(jiǎn)單句，包括主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)等．根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容本文人稱主要是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫正確，尤其要注意短文開頭結(jié)尾書信的書寫格式．