【題目】書面表達(dá) (5分)

根據(jù)中文提示寫一篇作文,要求語(yǔ)句通順,語(yǔ)法正確, 70左右。

1 Amy是我最好的朋友。我認(rèn)識(shí)她已經(jīng)五年了。

2 她方臉,長(zhǎng)鼻。長(zhǎng)著明亮而微笑的眼睛。

3 她在任何時(shí)候樂(lè)意助人。有一天…

4 長(zhǎng)大后她想當(dāng)社會(huì)工作者。因?yàn)椤?/span>

【答案】

Amy is my best friend.(0.5) I first met her five years ago.(0.5)分). She has a square face and a long nose.(0.5) Her also has bright and smiling eyes.(0.5分)。 Amy is ready to help others any time.(0.5分) one day she gave her seat to an old man on the bus.(1分)She wants to be a social worker when she grows up.(0.5) she thinks she can help more people with their problems.(1)(70words)

【解析】

試題分析:這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息,寫一篇關(guān)于我的朋友Amy英語(yǔ)小短文。我們應(yīng)運(yùn)用正確的熟悉的英語(yǔ)句子將下面的漢語(yǔ)提示的這些內(nèi)容盡量表達(dá)出來(lái)?梢愿鶕(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思銜接更自然。要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞,使文章上下文意思連貫,更出彩。最好使用我們熟悉和背過(guò)的句型,盡量不要使用復(fù)雜的從句,減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。使用熟悉的短語(yǔ)be ready to do sth. 時(shí)刻準(zhǔn)備去做某事,help sb. with sth. 幫助某人做某事。

寫作亮點(diǎn):這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文,短文中作者按照題目的漢語(yǔ)提示,介紹了Amy。短文中的語(yǔ)言合乎英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔,如我認(rèn)識(shí)她已經(jīng)五年了,現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)還沒學(xué),怎么辦呢?作者沒有使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),而是使用一般過(guò)去式來(lái)表達(dá):五年前我第一次遇見她。轉(zhuǎn)變思路和表達(dá)方式,這樣就豁然開朗了。

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