Question

8．假如你叫李華，市第三中學(xué)初三的學(xué)生．星期天你和班里的同學(xué)去康樂敬老院（old folk's home） 參加了社區(qū)活動(dòng)．請根據(jù)下面的圖畫的提示詞語，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的日記．可合理想象，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．句首已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（一）審題
本篇作文考查的為記敘文．要求利用所給的信息列舉在星期天去往敬老院的經(jīng)過．然后寫出你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)．
（二）列舉寫作要點(diǎn)．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文．內(nèi)容為利用所給的信息列舉在星期天去往敬老院的經(jīng)過．然后寫出你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)．人稱為第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．乘坐校車去往敬老院．老人見到我們的心情．2．在敬老院，我們?yōu)槔先俗龅氖虑椋?．活動(dòng)之后的感受．常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語：be pleased to do，sweep the floor，it's our duty to do sth．等．

解答 Sunday
Fine
Today，we took the school bus to Kang Le old folk's home．The old people greeted us warmly and they were very pleased to see us．We helped them do a lot of things in the old folk's home．We swept the floor for them，we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk．Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves that day．Finally，we had lunch together with the old people and the dishes were very delicious．
As the students in Grade Nine in No.3 Middle School，we like the activity very much．And I think it's our duty to help the old people，do you think so？

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇提綱類作文．此篇文章需要學(xué)生的適當(dāng)自我發(fā)揮，因此考生在認(rèn)真審題的前提下根據(jù)提綱規(guī)定的方向和范圍構(gòu)思和展開材料是至關(guān)重要的．作文中所用詞匯比較常見，考生可在日常生活中多多識記常用到的重點(diǎn)短語和句型，在動(dòng)手寫作之前可先找出要點(diǎn)，列出寫作的提綱，在提綱材料的基礎(chǔ)上，合理巧妙地構(gòu)思全文，充分表現(xiàn)材料的主題．