Question

15．遵守秩序是每一個公民應(yīng)該具備的良好品質(zhì)．請以Rules Make Life Beautiful為題，談?wù)勀銓ψ袷刂刃虻目捶ǎ?br />提示：
1．表達你對遵守秩序的看法；
2．通過描述自身的經(jīng)歷或你所了解的社會現(xiàn)象，闡明觀點；
3．提出你的希望或解決辦法．
要求：
1．內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；
3.80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文主題為：Rules Make Life Beautiful（規(guī)則讓生活更美好）
寫作要點為：1．表達你對遵守秩序的看法；
2．通過描述自身的經(jīng)歷或你所了解的社會現(xiàn)象，闡明觀點；
3．提出你的希望或解決辦法．

解答 Possible Version One：
Rules Make Life Beautiful
Rules mean something that all the citizens should try their best to guard．
Rules are everywhere around us--in schools，families，or the streets．We must obey them because rules keep life in good order．For example，if we don't obey the traffic rules，it will cause a lot of trouble．A terrible traffic accident happened to one of my friends a few days ago because he jumped a red light．He was badly hurt．So I do hope everyone of us keeps the rules．
If life was a garden，the rules would be green fingers．They make the garden more beautiful．Possible Version Two：
Rules Make Life Beautiful
Rules tell us what we may，must or must not do in a particular situation．Rules make our life and work run smoothly．
Rules are needed everywhere in our society，even when we are playing a game．However，sometimes，people break the rules．Last term，I played soccer with my friends．Unexpectedly，David，who is a pushy guy，hit John on the head bitterly because of his losing the game，which made all of us，including our head teacher and his parents，get into a big trouble．
As you see，without rules，civilized life would be impossible．Only by obeying the rules can we live a beautiful life．

點評 考生需抓住寫作要點進行寫作，理清寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，能夠?qū)ψ约旱目捶ㄕ归_分述，最好能用事實來進行例證．