Question

14．假期中，我們有時間做與學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)生活不同的很多事情，如旅游、干家務(wù)、做義工、參加夏（冬）令營…請你根據(jù)以往的假期生活經(jīng)歷，用英語寫一篇短文，跟同學(xué)們分享你在假期做過的一件事情及體會．
內(nèi)容提示：（1）講述你在假期里做過的一件事情；
（2）談?wù)勀阕鲞@件事情的體會．
要求：（1）中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；
（3）詞數(shù)80詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇文章寫作時要注意是寫自己的一次經(jīng)歷，還有對這件事情的體會，這是這篇文章的兩大關(guān)鍵．使用第一人稱，敘述過去的事用一般過去時態(tài)，要做到中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范．

解答 A trip to the country I went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays this year．I liked green plants，clear rivers lovely animals there．I breathed the fresh air on the mountain sometimes I went swimming in the river．I kept a diary every day．I liked not the scene of the countryside，but also the people there．I helped them to do farm work．I also helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons．The children were interested in English．They were good at reading writing，8ttt8．comdid not do well in listening speaking．I helped them improve their listening speaking．Their parents thought highly of me．I realized that knowledge is greatly needed in the countryside．

點評 本文是一篇提綱作文，要把握住文章的中心話題，用準(zhǔn)時態(tài)和人稱，注意過渡詞的使用，保持文章連貫通順．