Question

我們經(jīng)常聽(tīng)到一些同學(xué)，抱怨家長(zhǎng)不理解他們，不允許他們做他們想做的事情。假如你是一位中學(xué)生的父母，你會(huì)怎樣做呢？80詞左右。
提示：1.多交流，將孩子看作是朋友。
2.多鼓勵(lì)，少抱怨。
3.多給他們一些娛樂(lè)時(shí)間做他自己想做的事。
4.創(chuàng)造一個(gè)良好的家庭環(huán)境。
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Answer 1

If I wcre a parent, I would communicate with my child as much as possible. I would try to be his friend Iwoud not complain what hedid If were a parent, I would not complain what he did If I were a parent, I would encourage him more, however little profress he made I would encourage him to have fun. He could have his hobbies, such as playing conputer games,listening to music ang making friends. He could do what he liked
If I were a parent, the most important thing was that I would be a good model for him, and give him a happy family.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，主要內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，我們受先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確認(rèn)寫(xiě)作應(yīng)用的時(shí)態(tài)及主要單詞。本文是以以為父母的語(yǔ)氣寫(xiě)作，故人稱(chēng)主要就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：給材料作文的寫(xiě)作首先要做到的就是不遺漏要點(diǎn)，如是反映要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容。再就是應(yīng)該注意表述的邏輯性和條理性。盡量用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表述。