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8．初中階段學(xué)習(xí)快要結(jié)束了．假如你是Lily，你的老師是Miss Zhang，由于老師對(duì)你幫助很大，為了對(duì)老師表達(dá)感謝之情，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格所給的內(nèi)容寫一封信給你的老師表示感謝．

	主  要  內(nèi)  容
感謝的理由	●無私地培養(yǎng)了我	●樂意幫我學(xué)習(xí) ●關(guān)心我的生活 ●教我做好學(xué)生 …
感謝的方式	…（請(qǐng)考生結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷自擬 1點(diǎn)）
你的希望	…（請(qǐng)考生結(jié)合自身的認(rèn)識(shí)自擬 1點(diǎn)）

注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右．短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；
2．短文應(yīng)把表格中所示內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；
3．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，請(qǐng)考生在文中不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名與校名；
參考詞匯：without thinking of oneself 無私地
Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies!I will leave school very soon．I should say"thanks"to you．I've got so much help from you．With/Because of your help，I have changed a lot．You often train me without thinking of yourself．You are always willing to help me with my studies．And it's so nice of you to take good care of me．
What's more，you often teach me how to be a good student．When I have difficulty，you often encourage me to be brave and confident．I am so grateful to you for your help that I decide to work harder．
I hope you'll be happier and healthier than before．
Lots of love
Lily．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是寫一封信給你的老師表示感謝．注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．感謝的理由；無私地培養(yǎng)了我；樂意幫我學(xué)習(xí)；關(guān)心我的生活；教我做好學(xué)生；
2．感謝的方式；（自擬一點(diǎn)）
3．你的希望（自擬一點(diǎn)）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
be willing to do sth 樂意做某事
help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事
take care of 照顧
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
decide to do sth 決定做某事
【高分句型】
1．And ①it's so nice of you to②take good care of me．
①it is+adj+of sb+to do sth某人做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語．
②take care of 照顧

2．①When I have difficulty，you often②encourage me to be brave and confident．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句
②encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人做某事
3．I am so grateful to you for your help that I decide to work harder．
so…that如此…以致于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句．

解答 Dear Miss Zhang，
How time flies!I will leave school very soon．I should say"thanks"to you．I've got so much help from you．With/Because of your help，I have changed a lot．You often train me without thinking of yourself．You are always willing to help me with my studies．And it's so nice of you to take good care of me．【高分句型】
What's more，you often teach me how to be a good student．When I have difficulty，you often encourage me to be brave and confident．【高分句型】（感謝的理由）I am so grateful to you for your help that I decide to work harder．【高分句型】（感謝的方式）
I hope you'll be happier and healthier than before．（你的希望）
Lots of love
Lily．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖表給出材料的作文，圖表中給出的材料較為豐富，考生在寫作時(shí)，圖表內(nèi)容必須包括在內(nèi)．在自己的觀點(diǎn)部分，考生需要自己適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，建議考生在平時(shí)的英語學(xué)習(xí)中積累一些常用到的重點(diǎn)句型和短語，出彩的發(fā)揮會(huì)給文章增色不少．