Question

15．時(shí)間都去哪兒了？這是許多成年人的感慨，也是一些中學(xué)生的煩惱：沒有時(shí)間做作業(yè)，沒有時(shí)間從事個(gè)人愛好…
其實(shí)，時(shí)間就在我們的掌握之中，關(guān)鍵是能否合理利用．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以"How to spend our time properly"為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)80左右．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（2）內(nèi)容必須包括上圖中的要點(diǎn)，可作必要的發(fā)揮；
（3）條理清楚、語句連貫；
（4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名等信息．
How to spend our time properly
Where has our time gone？How should we spend our time properly？
As students，it is important for us to study，so we should make a plan for every day．Most of all，we should listen carefully in class．For homework，we need to make a list and work out how much time we need，and then finish them one by one．Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies．They can make us feel happy and confident．
But we don't need to spend so much time on them．So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies．
In other ways，we need time，too．For example，we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends．
If so，I'm sure we will live a happier school life．

Answer 1

分析 本題是對(duì)當(dāng)下非常熱的一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行討論，時(shí)間都去哪兒了，要求學(xué)生在寫作的時(shí)候，要能突出總結(jié)"時(shí)間就在我們的掌握之中"，寫作內(nèi)容要充分解釋如何合理的利用時(shí)間，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．

解答 One possible version：
How to spend our time properly
Where has our time gone？How should we spend our time properly？
    As students，it is important for us to study，so we should make a plan for every day．Most of all，we should listen carefully in class．For homework，we need to make a list and work out how much time we need，and then finish them one by one．Hobbies are also important in our lives and different students have different kinds of hobbies．They can make us feel happy and confident．But we don't need to spend so much time on them．So we should achieve a balance between our study and our hobbies．
    In other ways，we need time，too．For example，we often spend a lot of time talking with our friends at lunchtime and watching TV at the weekends．
    If so，I'm sure we will live a happier school life．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇圖表作文，學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)仔細(xì)分析圖表，引證典型數(shù)據(jù)并按提綱要求進(jìn)行取材與構(gòu)思．本題的關(guān)鍵是如何闡述時(shí)間和如何把握這個(gè)論點(diǎn)，說出應(yīng)該如何利用時(shí)間．