Question

【題目】書面表達

某英語報開展“How to Deal with Our Stress Problems”征文比賽，請你根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，簡要描述并適當發(fā)表自己的觀點，寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1. 盡管我們常常感到有壓力，但是我們應(yīng)該找到合適的方式來解壓。

2. 我們可以穿像藍色和白色一樣的冷色調(diào)來使我們自己感到放松；

2. 我們應(yīng)該足夠細心，因為“失之毫厘，謬以千里”；

3. 我們也應(yīng)該有自己業(yè)余愛好，有可能的話，參加一些活動的選拔;

4. 任何時候都不要失去信心。通過努力學(xué)習(xí)，我們會取得大的進步。

5. 有問題時，我們…

要求：1. 內(nèi)容須包含所有要點，語句通順，意思連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)90個左右； 3. 第5點的內(nèi)容需展開合理想象，用2句話補充完整。

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Deal with Our Stress Problems

Although we often feel stressed, we should find some suitable ways to deal with stress. We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also have our own hobbies, try out for some activities if possible. Don’t lose heart at any time. We will make great progress through hard work. When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. It’s not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also have our own hobbies, try out for some activities if possible.等等。