Question

【題目】寫作

假如Lucy 是新來的外教，她用中文簡單介紹了自己五年前和現(xiàn)在的一些情況，要求寫一篇介紹她的英語短文。請你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容提示，完成這篇短文。

要求 ：1.根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；運(yùn)用所學(xué)短語used to;

2.提示詞：straight(直的); curly（卷曲的）; .personality（性格）humorous（幽默的）

3. 80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

	五年前	現(xiàn)在
外貌特征	胖，長卷發(fā)	瘦，短直發(fā)
性格	安靜，不愛說話	活躍，幽默
愛好	聽音樂	旅游
生活方式	經(jīng)常吃快餐	在家自己做飯

Lucy is our new foreign teacher.She has changed a lot in the past five years.

Answer 1

【答案】

Five years ago,she was heavy and had long curly hair. But now she is thin and has short straight hair.

As for her personality, she used to be quiet and did not like talking. However, she is active and humorous now. she often makes us laugh in class. Lucy used to listen to music,but now she spends much of her free time travelling all over the world. She says it is exciting. In the pass,she often ate fast food.

Now she loves to cook at home on her own. She thinks it is good for her health.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹新來的外教五年前和現(xiàn)在的不同，小作者要根據(jù)前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如As for her personality,

she used to be quiet and did not like talking. However, she is active and humorous now.等，Because等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。