Question

12．從今年三月起，全國各地都在積極開展"學雷鋒"活動．你了解雷鋒嗎？請談談你的看法和今后的打算．
1談談你所了解的雷鋒．
2你將來的打算：
A．努力學習．
B．送書，幫助貧困孩子．
C．周末看望老人．
D．在家?guī)透改缸黾覄眨?br />注意：
（1）詞數(shù)60-80個左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
（2）覆蓋所有要點；可適當發(fā)揮，增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
        The Spirit of Lifeng
  The people all over China are learning from Leifengnow．He is the great example to all of us．He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything．So he became the spirit of Chinese people．
As a student of the 21^st century，we should learn from him and try to help others．But what should we do？First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．Second，we could help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities and so on．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible．Finally，we should help our parents with housework at home．Because parents are often tired of hard work．
Lei Feng has gone，but we can be new Lei Fengs．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容談談對學雷鋒活動的看法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從兩個大的方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1談談你所了解的雷鋒．
2你將來的打算：其中還有四小點
A．努力學習．
B．送書，幫助貧困孩子．
C．周末看望老人．
D．在家?guī)透改缸黾覄眨?br />常用到的重點短語：
learn from sb向誰學習．
be ready to do sth準備好做某事
try to do sth盡力做某事
and so on等等
spend 時間with sb和某人一起度過
as…as possible盡可能的…
help sb with sth幫助某人做某事
高分句型：
First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．
本句中的so that引導的目的狀語從句．并且 to help others動詞不定式作為后置定語．
Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．
句中Whenever and wherever表示無論何時何地，做句子的狀語．

解答 The Spirit of Lei Feng
The people all over China are learning from Lei Feng now．He is the great example to all of us．He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything．So he became the spirit of Chinese people．（我所了解的雷鋒）
As a student of the 21^st century，we should learn from him and try to help others．But what should we do？First，we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others．（高分句型）（努力學習）Second，we could help the children．Give them books，warm clothes，raise money for charities and so on（送書，幫助貧困孩子．）．And on weekends，we can visit old people，spend time with them and help them as much as possible（周末看望老人）．Finally，we should help our parents with housework at home．Because parents are often tired of hard work．（在家?guī)透改缸黾覄眨?br />Lei Feng has gone，but we can be new Lei Fengs．Whenever and wherever，we can show our kindness．（高分句型）（發(fā)出號召）

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據內容要點提示運用相關的句型結構靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．