Question

【題目】越來越多汽車進(jìn)入我們的家庭生活，改善了我們的生活，但同時也帶來了很多問題，如堵車和車禍，給家庭和社會帶來極大的危害。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該怎樣做呢？

請寫一篇有關(guān)交通安全的短文(80字左右)。內(nèi)容包含：

1. 遵守交通規(guī)則，如走人行道/過斑馬線。

2. 別在街道上或馬路上玩耍和踢球。

3. 勸父母不能酒后駕車。

你可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，讓短文通順，過渡自然。

參考詞匯：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑馬線

注：第一段已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（已給出的部分不必再抄寫在答題卡上）

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

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Answer 1

【答案】

With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody’s business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side. When we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road. We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk or laugh while driving etc.

Cars are coming into our life and make our life become easy. If everyone pays more attention to the road safety, the world will become much better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用祈使句以及主從復(fù)合句如If everyone pays more attention to the road safety, the world will become much better（如果大家更加關(guān)注公路安全，世界將會變得更加美好），為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。