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5．隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物成為一種新型的購物方式．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的利與弊．
要求：1．語句流暢，書寫規(guī)范．2．包含提示內(nèi)容，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．3．詞數(shù)80左右，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．4．文中不能出現(xiàn)人名、地名等真實(shí)信息．

Advantages	Disadvantages
方便（convenient）；24小時(shí)營業(yè)； 不用排隊(duì)	看不見物品；容易受到欺騙（be cheated）； 不能享受和朋友一起購物的樂趣

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now．It is a new way of shopping．Many things are offered and wait for your choosing．Convenience is the most important advantage．You can buy anything as you like．You don't have to queue with other shoppers．
Meanwhile，it is often open for 24 hours a day．However，there are many disadvantages about shopping online．You can't actually see the real products．So you may be cheated easily．Also，many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping．
In conclusion，we should make proper use of the internet shopping．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的利與弊．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二，三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1優(yōu)點(diǎn)：方便（convenient）；24小時(shí)營業(yè)；不用排隊(duì)
2缺點(diǎn)：看不見物品；容易受到欺騙（be cheated）；不能享受和朋友一起購物的樂趣
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
wait for 等候
have to 不得不
get along with sb 與某人相處
in conclusion 總之
make use of 使用
【高分句型】
1．You can buy anything as you like．
as you like．a(chǎn)s作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾先行詞anything．
2．So you may be cheated easily．
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過去分詞．
3．①In conclusion，we should②make proper use of the internet shopping．
①in conclusion 總之
②make proper use of 合理使用

解答 Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now．It is a new way of shopping．（總述）
Many things are offered and wait for your choosing．Convenience is the most important advantage（方便）．You can buy anything as you like．【高分句型】You don't have to queue with other shoppers．（不用排隊(duì)）Meanwhile，it is often open for 24 hours a day．（24小時(shí)營業(yè)）（優(yōu)點(diǎn)）
However，there are many disadvantages about shopping online．You can't actually see the real products．（看不見物品）So you may be cheated easily．【高分句型】（容易受到欺騙）Also，many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping．（不能享受和朋友一起購物的樂趣）（缺點(diǎn)）
In conclusion，we should make proper use of the internet shopping．【高分句型】（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)通過一個(gè)表格形式給出．動(dòng)筆之前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)．給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．可以適當(dāng)使用兩介詞使語意通順，句子連貫，短文最后可以發(fā)表一點(diǎn)鐘自己的看法．這是一篇說明性的文章，寫作時(shí)態(tài)主要就是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意人稱和數(shù)的常見問題，寫好后多讀幾遍適當(dāng)修改．