Question

【題目】寫作

以“The Hero in My Heart”為題，寫一篇不少于80詞的短文。

提示：可以談?wù)撘幌履阈闹械挠⑿凼钦l(比如親人、朋友、老師或名人等)；他（她）有什么樣的事跡或故事；你喜歡他（她）的原因及應(yīng)該怎樣向他（她）學(xué)習(xí)。

The Hero in My Heart

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Answer 1

【答案】

Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars. And he is also a hero in my heart.

He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well.

From Jackie Chan, we can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是介紹自己心中的英雄，英雄有什么樣的事跡或故事；你喜歡英雄的原因及應(yīng)該怎樣向他（她）學(xué)習(xí)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句子的主語應(yīng)該是第三人稱單數(shù)，應(yīng)該簡單地陳述一下他的故事，要注意上下文的銜接。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars. He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films. As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well.用了一些連詞when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。