Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。（15分）

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上購物,網(wǎng)購（Internet Shopping）已成為流行趨勢,而網(wǎng)購的利弊也成為人們討論的熱點(diǎn),請以“Internet Shopping”為題,參考下面的信息,并結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)寫一篇英語短文,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

Advantages	Disadvantages
1. 方便(convenient),可以在家買東西； 2. 有很多的商品信息； 3. 價格便宜。	1. 實(shí)物（material object）和圖片有差距； 2. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)支付不安全。

要求: (1) 詞數(shù)80字左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

(2) 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Internet Shopping

These days, Internet Shopping has been strangely popular and e-commerce has exactly changed people’s life style so that it has caused a heated discussion. ______________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Internet Shopping

These days, Internet Shopping has been strangely popular and e-commerce has exactly changed people’s life style so that it has caused a heated discussion.

It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day. It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.

But “Every coin has two sides. ” So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. So we should be careful when we shop on the internet.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。要求中只給出了要點(diǎn)，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。