Question

【題目】書面表達。（15分）

現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網上購物,網購（Internet Shopping）已成為流行趨勢,而網購的利弊也成為人們討論的熱點,請以“Internet Shopping”為題,參考下面的信息,并結合自己的觀點寫一篇英語短文,可適當發(fā)揮。

Advantages	Disadvantages
1. 方便(convenient),可以在家買東西； 2. 有很多的商品信息； 3. 價格便宜。	1. 實物（material object）和圖片有差距； 2. 網絡支付不安全。

要求: (1) 詞數(shù)80字左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

(2) 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。

Internet Shopping

These days, Internet Shopping has been strangely popular and e-commerce has exactly changed people’s life style so that it has caused a heated discussion. ______________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Internet Shopping

These days, Internet Shopping has been strangely popular and e-commerce has exactly changed people’s life style so that it has caused a heated discussion.

It’s a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shop are open 24 hours a day. It is often to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you can’t buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.

But “Every coin has two sides. ” So is Internet shopping. You can’t see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and don’t like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. What’s more, it’s not safe to pay through the internet. So we should be careful when we shop on the internet.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是網上購物的優(yōu)缺點。要求中只給出了要點，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。要求中已經給出了部分提示，動筆先應先認真閱讀提示，確定寫作內容。寫作中注意表達觀點時的常用句式，注意在表達不同觀點時，連詞的使用。內容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。

【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。