Question

12．有個中文網站提出"走路去上學"的倡議，請你就這一話題寫一篇約90個單詞的英文短文．
內容提示：有60%的同學認為（1）走路有利于健康且安全． （2）不需要父母接送，學會遵守交通規(guī)則．（3）道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵．有40%的同學認為走路浪費許多時間，路途遠的同學可能會造成上課遲到．對此，你怎么看？
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise【高分句型一】．I think it's good for health and it's safe．When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．【高分句型二】Also，we can help each other．What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise．步行去上學是鍛煉的很好的一個方式．
Walking 是動名詞，在句子中作主語．
【高分句型二】we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．
我們可以談論一些有趣的事情，更好地了解彼此．Something是不定代詞，修飾不定代詞的形容詞要后置．

解答 Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise【高分句型一】．I think it's good for health and it's safe．When we walk with our classmates，we can talk about something interesting and know each other better．【高分句型二】Also，we can help each other．What's more，if we walk，our parents don't have to send us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．As a result，there will be fewer cars in the city．Then the streets are no longer crowded．
   I hope more and more students will go to school on foot．

點評 解答這種題目時，我們應該仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點． 要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫． 根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣． 在平常的學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，讓文章更出彩．