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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

最近，學(xué)校就空中俱樂(lè)部的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容設(shè)置做了意向調(diào)查(結(jié)果見(jiàn)下面圖表)。請(qǐng)你幫俱樂(lè)部用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)告，并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕ɑ蚪ㄗh。

◆51% practice spoken English

◆25% watch English movies

◆18% read more classics

◆6% learn foreign culture

注意：(1)文中應(yīng)包含圖表所提供的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)想法和建議至少兩條；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80～100(短文開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，考生可以選擇使用)。

Recently we've made a survey of school sky English club.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently we’ve made a servey of sky English club. Here are the results. We find that fifty one percent of the students practice their spoken English by using Internet. Twenty five percent like watching English movies, which can make their holiday life better. Eighteen percent would like to read more English claasics because they’re interested in them. Six percent hope that they can learn more foreign culture, such as manners and westen festivals.

As far as I know, it’s very helpful to improve engliah by singing English songs. Maybe we can invite foreigners to introduce good ways to learn songs. I’m sure all of us will have fun in the sky English club.

【解析】試題分析：本文考查圖表作文。1）弄清圖表內(nèi)容。（2）結(jié)合提示詞，明確考查意圖。根據(jù)提示，選擇正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，運(yùn)用所給或所學(xué)的詞語(yǔ)，盡量運(yùn)用熟悉的句型，作適當(dāng)展開(kāi)。（3）注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢，連貫。（4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)，語(yǔ)法，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)序，主謂一致，句子的語(yǔ)序和表達(dá)是否符合英文習(xí)慣等，盡量減少錯(cuò)誤。注意：(1)文中應(yīng)包含圖表所提供的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)想法和建議至少兩條；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80～100

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文。時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)完整、應(yīng)用詞匯靈活準(zhǔn)確，句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，上下文連貫，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。