Question

15．三年的初中生活，你對自己的表現(xiàn)一定有滿意的方面和不滿意的方面．假如你是林微，請參照以下提示，給你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們用英語寫一篇畢業(yè)留言，希望對們有所幫助．

	提示內(nèi)容	提示詞
對自己滿意的方面	勤學(xué)好問，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；---	work hard，a good habit of
對自己不滿意的方面	忙于學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉身體較少；---	be busy，do less sports
對學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議或希望	樂于助人，積極參加志愿者活動；---	be glad to，volunteer activities

注意：1參照提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名；
3詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear boys and girls，
I'm Linwei．It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years．Since I entered this school，I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits．As a result，I have been doing well in my subjects．And I have always been ready to help others，especially those classmates who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years．
However，I was busy with schoolwork so I did less exercise．I didn't often take part in social activities，either．
Now I hope you're having a great time at school．And be always ready to help others and take part in some volunteer activities．、
Yours，
Linwei．
Yours，
Linwei．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫封信說說你對自己滿意和不滿意的方面，并希望他們在學(xué)校度過一段美好的時光．注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．滿意的方面；勤學(xué)好問，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣
2．不滿意的方面；忙于學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉身體較少
3．希望；樂于助人，積極參加志愿者活動；
常用到的重點短語：
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
as a result 因此
do well in 擅長…
be ready to do sth 樂于做某事
have difficulty in  在…有困難
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．Since I entered this school，I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits．
since引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，常常和現(xiàn)在完成時連用．
2．I have always①been ready to help others，especially those classmates ②who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years．
①be ready to do sth 樂于做某事
②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，who作為從句的主語，修飾先行詞classmates．have difficulty in  在…有困難
3．Now I hope you're having a great time at school．
hope后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．

解答 Dear boys and girls，
I'm Linwei．It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years．
Since I entered this school，I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits．【高分句型】As a result，I have been doing well in my subjects．And I have always been ready to help others，especially those classmates who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years．【高分句型】（滿意的方面）
However，I was busy with schoolwork so I did less exercise．I didn't often take part in social activities，either．（不滿意的方面）
Now I hope you're having a great time at school．【高分句型】And be always ready to help others and take part in some volunteer activities．（希望和祝愿）
Yours，
Linwei．

點評 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)．運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時也要符合事實．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．