Question

15．三年的初中生活，你對(duì)自己的表現(xiàn)一定有滿意的方面和不滿意的方面．假如你是林微，請(qǐng)參照以下提示，給你的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們用英語(yǔ)寫一篇畢業(yè)留言，希望對(duì)們有所幫助．

	提示內(nèi)容	提示詞
對(duì)自己滿意的方面	勤學(xué)好問，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣；---	work hard，a good habit of
對(duì)自己不滿意的方面	忙于學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉身體較少；---	be busy，do less sports
對(duì)學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的建議或希望	樂于助人，積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)；---	be glad to，volunteer activities

注意：1參照提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名；
3詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear boys and girls，
I'm Linwei．It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years．Since I entered this school，I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits．As a result，I have been doing well in my subjects．And I have always been ready to help others，especially those classmates who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years．
However，I was busy with schoolwork so I did less exercise．I didn't often take part in social activities，either．
Now I hope you're having a great time at school．And be always ready to help others and take part in some volunteer activities．、
Yours，
Linwei．
Yours，
Linwei．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹們寫封信說說你對(duì)自己滿意和不滿意的方面，并希望他們?cè)趯W(xué)校度過一段美好的時(shí)光．注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．滿意的方面；勤學(xué)好問，養(yǎng)成良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣
2．不滿意的方面；忙于學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉身體較少
3．希望；樂于助人，積極參加志愿者活動(dòng)；
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
as a result 因此
do well in 擅長(zhǎng)…
be ready to do sth 樂于做某事
have difficulty in  在…有困難
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1．Since I entered this school，I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits．
since引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，常常和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)連用．
2．I have always①been ready to help others，especially those classmates ②who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years．
①be ready to do sth 樂于做某事
②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，who作為從句的主語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞classmates．have difficulty in  在…有困難
3．Now I hope you're having a great time at school．
hope后是省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear boys and girls，
I'm Linwei．It's my honor to share what I have got and lost in the past three years．
Since I entered this school，I have been studying hard and have developed some good study habits．【高分句型】As a result，I have been doing well in my subjects．And I have always been ready to help others，especially those classmates who have had difficulty in their lessons during the past three years．【高分句型】（滿意的方面）
However，I was busy with schoolwork so I did less exercise．I didn't often take part in social activities，either．（不滿意的方面）
Now I hope you're having a great time at school．【高分句型】And be always ready to help others and take part in some volunteer activities．（希望和祝愿）
Yours，
Linwei．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性．完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．
這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．