Question

【題目】書面表達。

大家進入中學已經半學期了，認識了很多新朋友。請根據以下信息介紹你的好朋友Millie.

要點：

Name	Millie	Age	13
looks	tall; slim; wear glasses
Class	Class 1, Grade 7; ground floor; clean; bright
Go to school	Get up, at 6:30 a.m.; not far from school; on foot
Hobbies	Piano; reading; ……
Dreams	……

要求：1. 文章需包含所有信息并作適當拓展。其中愛好至少補充一個，夢想至少寫一個。

2.結構合理，文章通順。

3. 詞數在80詞左右。

My best friend

Answer 1

【答案】Millie is my best friend. She is tall and slim and wears a pair of glasses.

She likes her school very much. She is in Class1, Grade 7. Her classroom is on the ground (first) floor. It is clean and bright.

She gets up at half past six every morning. Her home is not far away from her school. So she likes walking to school. In her free time, she sometimes plays the piano and reads books. She also likes chatting with her friends online.

Her dream is to be a nurse because she is good at looking after others. I hope her dream can come true.

【解析】

這是一篇材料作文。請根據以下信息介紹你的好朋友Millie。結合所給材料可知本文人稱主要是第三人稱，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。認真閱讀表格內容，審清主題，根據表格提示要點，列出本文的寫作提綱。寫作中可適當使用連詞，注意表達順序，表達要有條理性，語句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關系，字數要在80詞以上，不要寫的太少。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無拼寫、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。本文提綱：米莉是我最好的朋友。她又高又瘦，戴著一副眼鏡。她非常喜歡她的學校。她在七年級一班。她的教室在一樓。它干凈明亮。她每天早上六點半起床。她家離學校不遠。所以她喜歡步行上學。在她的空閑時間，她有時彈鋼琴和讀書。她還喜歡在網上和朋友聊天。她的夢想是成為一名護士，因為她善于照顧別人。我希望她的夢想能夠實現(xiàn)。