Question

8．為豐富學(xué)生的校園生活，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，學(xué)校每年都會(huì)開展形式多樣的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)．既為有體育特長(zhǎng)的同學(xué)提供了展示的舞臺(tái)，也給了其他同學(xué)自由表現(xiàn)的機(jī)會(huì)．運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)中有人奮力拼搏，有人樂(lè)于幫助，有人善于宣傳報(bào)道…請(qǐng)你寫出某次運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)中自己的表現(xiàn)和感受，并為學(xué)校的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)提出1～2條具體的建議．
要求：1.80詞左右．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I couldn't hold back my tears because of the unexpected failure．因?yàn)橐馔獾氖Ю�我控制不住自己的眼淚．
because of因?yàn)椤�，后加名詞代詞或動(dòng)名詞．
【高分句型二】
My suggestion is ①that we can start more fun games ②so that more students can take part in．我的建議是我們可以開展更多的比賽，那樣更多的學(xué)生能參加．
①that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句，與is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Our school has a sports meeting every October．I join in the 100-meter race every time．Last year，I fell down in the final race．After I got up，it was too late．I couldn't hold back my tears because of the unexpected failure．【高分句型一】Then most of my classmates came around me．They reminded me of the real sports spirit．I'll never forget the experience．（運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)中自己的表現(xiàn)和感受）My suggestion is that we can start more fun games so that more students can take part in【高分句型二】（建議）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實(shí)際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的 句子，劃分必要的段落．但要注意句式的靈活運(yùn)用，長(zhǎng)、短句，簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運(yùn)用．