Question

15．最近你和你的同學(xué)就"Should teenagers follow the fashion？"展開了討論．現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以此為題，參照表內(nèi)提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文．

Your classmates'ideas	Your ideas
=1．can keep up with the times，look smart and fashionable	=1．…
=2．waste money and time，get in the way of the schoolwork	=2．…

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Should teenagers follow the fashion？
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about teens'fashion following．…
Some of them think teenagers should follow the fashion because it can help us keep up with the times．And it makes teens look cool and fashionable．But some students disagree．They believe that it wastes time and money．Also it may get in the way of the schoolwork．
In my opinion，following the fashion is good for teens．As we know，teenagers need all-round development．However，the knowledge in books alone has been unable to meet our needs．On the other hand，teenagers are also part of society．Society is always progressing．It's our duty to know what's going on in the world．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以"Should teenagers follow the fashion？為題說說就此話題的討論的結(jié)果，并發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)；與時(shí)俱進(jìn)，看起來漂亮?xí)r尚，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和金錢，阻礙學(xué)業(yè)
2．你的觀點(diǎn)
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事
get in the way of 擋路，妨礙
be good for 對(duì)…有益
on the other hand 另一方面

【高分句型】
1．Some of them think①teenagers should follow the fashion②because it can③help us keep up with the times．
①think后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
③help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事，keep up with the times與時(shí)俱進(jìn)
2．①In my opinion，②following the fashion is good for teens．
①In my opinion依我看來
②動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．be good for 對(duì)…有益
3．①It's our duty to know②what's going on in the world．
①it's one's duty to do sth 做某事是某人的職責(zé)，it是形式主語，動(dòng)詞不定式是真正主語．
②what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句．

解答 One possible version：
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about teens'fashion following．Some of them think teenagers should follow the fashion because it can help us keep up with the times．【高分句型】And it makes teens look cool and fashionable．But some students disagree．They believe that it wastes time and money．Also it may get in the way of the schoolwork．（同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)）
In my opinion，following the fashion is good for teens．【高分句型】As we know，teenagers need all-round development．However，the knowledge in books alone has been unable to meet our needs．On the other hand，teenagers are also part of society．Society is always progressing．It's our duty to know what's going on in the world．【高分句型】（我的觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是寫一篇有關(guān)中學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該追隨潮流的書面表達(dá)，寫作時(shí)我們可以根據(jù)討論的結(jié)果說說同學(xué)們的意見并表達(dá)自己的意見，同時(shí)在寫作時(shí)要注重條理性和層次性，注重語言的準(zhǔn)確性和完整性．盡量不要使用錯(cuò)誤的短語或句子．