Question

【題目】根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作。

假設(shè)你是陳明,15歲,是某中學(xué)的九年級學(xué)生。你看完上面這篇文章后,深有體會。請你就此寫一封信給報社編輯。

內(nèi)容包括:

1.簡單介紹自己。

2.告訴他(她)你在九年級某天的生活學(xué)習(xí)情況和感受。

3.距離中考時間不長了,你打算如何備考,努力考上你的理想高中?

寫作要求:

1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。

2.語句連貫,詞數(shù)80左右;作文的開頭及結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Editor:

I have read the article in your newspaper.I think it’s great.Now I would like to tell you something about my Grade 9 life.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I have read the article in your newspaper.I think it’s great.Now I would like to tell you something about my Grade 9 life.My name is Chen Ming.I am a Grade 9 student in a middle school.I am 15 years old now.

Let me tell you what I did one day.I got up at 6:00,had a quick breakfast and went to school by bike.I had 5 classes in the morning and 4 in the afternoon till 5:45.Not all classes were interesting,but I had to listen carefully because they were very important for the coming exam.After school,I had to do much homework.I didn’t go to bed until 12 o’clock.I think my Grade 9 life is very busy.

Before the exam,I try to make a plan to study at home every day and make good use of every minute so that I can enter my dream school.

Yours,

Chen Ming

【解析】本文是一篇提綱作文。本文所給的提綱內(nèi)容清晰，要求明確。動筆前要認(rèn)真審題，挖掘深層內(nèi)涵，簡要勾勒要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中要注意人稱、時態(tài)以及主謂一致問題。同時適當(dāng)使用連詞，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級的語言，這樣會使文章更出色。

寫作內(nèi)容包括:

1.簡單介紹自己。

2.告訴他(她)你在九年級某天的生活學(xué)習(xí)情況和感受。

3.距離中考時間不長了,你打算如何備考,努力考上你的理想高中?