Question

   本單元圍繞話題“難忘的事件”談?wù)撨^(guò)去發(fā)生的 事件。與之相關(guān)的話題作文主要是講述過(guò)去某一時(shí) 刻或一段時(shí)間內(nèi)正在發(fā)生的事。圍繞這一話題談?wù)?人們?cè)谶^(guò)去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在做某事，此話題是新課程標(biāo) 準(zhǔn)中要求學(xué)習(xí)的一個(gè)重要話題，也是單元測(cè)試或中考 常考查的話題作文之一。

  昨天下午一場(chǎng)暴風(fēng)雨襲擊了你所在的城市，根據(jù) 表格中的信息，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，介紹一下 當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。

Activity Survey
When	Who	What
at the time of the   rainstorm	some students	playing basketball in the gym
	some students	reading books
	no students	playing computer   games
	some students	doing homework

1. 人稱:主要用第三人稱。

2. 時(shí)態(tài):過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)。

3. 結(jié)構(gòu)提綱：

(1) 引人話題:開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，點(diǎn)明主題。

(2) 談?wù)撚^點(diǎn):詳細(xì)敘述暴風(fēng)雨發(fā)生時(shí)同學(xué)們?cè)诟墒裁础?/p>

4. 語(yǔ)句儲(chǔ)備：

(1) ... when it began to rain heavily.

(2) at the time of the rainstorm

(3) playing basketball 

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

Answer 1

One possible version ：

   A rainstorm hit our city yesterday afternoon. We were having free time activities when it began to rain heavily.all the students were having colorful activities at the time of the rainstorm.Some students were playing basketball in the gym. Some students were reading books. No students were playing computer games. Some students were doing homework. We were having a good time and were very relaxed that afternoon.