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【題目】中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约�。某英文�?bào)正在就“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞?/span>”這一話題進(jìn)行征文。假設(shè)你是二十二中八年級(jí)（3）班的班長(zhǎng)，最近你對(duì)班上同學(xué)課后放松方式進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報(bào)投稿。

對(duì)象	人數(shù)	常用放松方式	你的觀點(diǎn)
十二中初三（3）班	60 男（31）女（29）	1．看電視（30人）：2．玩電腦游戲（12人）：3．聽(tīng)音樂(lè)（8人）4進(jìn)行體育銀煉（5人：5．沒(méi) 有時(shí)間放松（5人）	哪一種（些）放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)�？為什么�?/span>

TheProperWay(s)forStudentstoRelax

I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 8, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】The Proper Way(s) for Students to Relax

I am the monitor of Class 3 Grade 8. No 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.

There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls). Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music. 5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax. As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax.

In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play ping-pong.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞?/span>”這一話題。所提供的表格中列舉了對(duì)象、人數(shù)、常用的放松方式。主要從常用放松方式和你的觀點(diǎn)等方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型】

I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. 我認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)是一種適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞�，因�(yàn)樗�能讓我們的大腦和眼睛休息。because it can rest our brains and eyes.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。