Question

12．你叫李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Tim寫信告訴你他下學(xué)期將以交換生的身份來廣州訪問學(xué)習(xí)，這是他第一次來華，他很擔(dān)心自己不能適應(yīng)廣州的生活．為了幫助他更好地了解廣州的文化，你打算邀請(qǐng)他暑假來廣州并寄宿到你們家．請(qǐng)你回信告訴他你的計(jì)劃．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的構(gòu)思圖來擬定你暑假招待Tim的計(jì)劃．

Dear Tim，
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student．To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou，Iwill show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．They are very famous．We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou．Let's play Tai Chi together．And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou．I will help your wishes come true．．
Yours，
Li Hua
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．）
（2）不得透漏學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是回信邀請(qǐng)網(wǎng)友暑假來廣州并寄宿到你們家．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1我的計(jì)劃（1）參觀廣州名勝；（2）喝早茶，品嘗廣州美食；（3）耍太極
2其他計(jì)劃
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
show sb around帶某人參觀
the places of interest 名勝
take a plan 制定計(jì)劃
come true 實(shí)現(xiàn)
【高分句型】
1．①To help you ②get used to the life in Guangzhou，I will ③show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．
①動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語
②get used to習(xí)慣于，to是介詞．
③show sb around帶某人參觀
the places of interest 名勝

2．And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou．
 what作為引導(dǎo)詞的賓語從句，作為do的賓語．
3．I will help your wishes come true．
help…do sth 幫助做某事

解答 Dear Tim，
I am so glad that you will visit Guangzhou as an exchange student．To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou，I will show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．（參觀廣州名勝）【高分句型】They are very famous．We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou．（喝早茶，品嘗廣州美食）Let's play Tai Chi together．（耍太極）And you can take a plan and do what you want to do in Guangzhou．【高分句型】I will help your wishes come true．（其他計(jì)劃）【高分句型】
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全．句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致．文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性．寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全．文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如To help you get used to the life in Guangzhou，I will show you around the places of interest in Guangzhou．They are very famous．We will drink the morning tea and taste the delicious food of Guangzhou．等等