Question

【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 （15分）

Da Vinci Leonardo
Year of birth	1452		Birthplace	農(nóng)村，意大利
Year of death	1519		Career	畫家，發(fā)明家，音樂家，工程師，科學(xué)家
Life
Childhood		從小很有天賦和藝術(shù)才能
Adulthood		長(zhǎng)大后，學(xué)做過很多不同的工作。
Contributions		有很多享譽(yù)世界的畫作，其中蒙娜麗莎可能是世上最著名的畫。他還有很多發(fā)明。

Answer 1

【答案】

Da Vinci Leonardo

Da Vinci Leonardo was born on April 15, 1452 in a small town of Italy. He died in 1519. From an early age, Da Vinci had an interest in painting. When he grew up, he learned to do a lot of different jobs. Most people know that he was a great painter. One of his famous paintings is called Mona Lisa. However, Da Vinci was also a talented inventor, musician, engineer and scientist. Although Leonardo hated war, he invented many different machines used for war. His most special invention was the machine gun, which was produced and used in war many years later.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)所給信息，來介紹人物達(dá)芬奇。題目中有關(guān)于達(dá)芬奇的具體信息，我們應(yīng)用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。這些信息包括了達(dá)芬奇的年齡、出生地、職業(yè)和作品等，寫作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。而且這些關(guān)于介紹人物時(shí)所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的，所以將平時(shí)的積累發(fā)揮出來就可以。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求，給我們介紹了著名人物達(dá)芬奇，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。而且作者在寫作時(shí)，并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序，逐句翻譯的，而是將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá)，這一點(diǎn)很好。短文中的語言合乎英語的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的句式，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。如復(fù)合句When he grew up, he learned to do a lot of different jobs.、固定短語was talented in和a lot of、介詞短語From an early age、連詞However, Da Vinci was also a talented inventor, musician, engineer and scientist.等。