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3．埃及千年神廟驚現(xiàn)中文涂鴉"丁××到此一游"．此事曝光后，引起國(guó)內(nèi)外廣泛關(guān)注，某國(guó)外英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站就此發(fā)起討論．請(qǐng)你以一名中國(guó)中學(xué)生（網(wǎng)名Whitecloud） 的身份，跟帖發(fā)表自己的看法．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．表明身份；
2．發(fā)表看法；
3．你的行動(dòng)
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)．
Bluesky：""丁××到此一游"appeared in the ancient temple in Egypt．It's said Ding is a Chinese school student．That's surprising．Maybe Ding will become known this…．
Whitecloud：I come from China．Whitecloud：（表明身份）I'm also a middle school student like Ding．（看法及感受）When I read the news，my heart ached．What Ding did made me sad．Ding should feel sorry for that．As a student，it's very important to care about what we do in public．（行動(dòng)）For example，we'd better keep our voice down．I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things．And I'm sure we Chinese will show our best to the whole world!
Sincerely yours，．

Answer 1

分析 本題是就一起熱點(diǎn)網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)間發(fā)表看法．故動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)確定材料，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這起事件的看法，同時(shí)注意自己是中國(guó)人，要自覺(jué)的維護(hù)自己國(guó)家的形象．結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱(chēng)就是第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少．動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)是1．表明身份；2．發(fā)表看法；3．你的行動(dòng)．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．可用短語(yǔ)句型有：made sb　adj，It's necessary/important （for us） to，had　better　do sth，等等

解答 答案：
Whitecloud：I come from China�。ū砻魃矸荩�I'm also a middle school student like Ding．（看法及感受）When I read the news，my heart ached．What Ding did made me sad．Ding should feel sorry for that．As a student，it's very important to care about what we do in public．（行動(dòng)）For example，we'd better keep our voice down．I will be more polite to people around me and take better care of public things．And I'm sure we Chinese will  show our best to the whole world!
Sincerely yours，

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇提綱作文，本題在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞，要特別注意幾種情況的描述，不能逐句翻譯，同時(shí)要根據(jù)提示有效靈活的構(gòu)思，恰當(dāng)使用邏輯詞語(yǔ)，讓文章顯得有條理，不雜亂．