Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分）

假若你是健康專家李教授，你被邀請(qǐng)到一所中學(xué)給學(xué)生作一場(chǎng)健康方面的講座，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。字?jǐn)?shù)80個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

飲食	少吃垃圾食品，多吃健康食品如水果和蔬菜
鍛煉	最好有自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)，每星期鍛煉2-3次；盡量步行來(lái)代替乘車(chē)
生活習(xí)慣	保持足夠睡眠；睡前可聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，不要玩電腦游戲或看電視 每天保持心情愉快十分重要

Hi, everyone, today I want to talk about how to keep healthy. I hope my advice will help you.

If you can follow my advice, I am sure you can be in good health. Thanks for listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, everyone, today I want to talk about how to keep healthy. I hope my advice will help you.You should eat less junk food and eat more healthy food, like fruit and vegetables. It’s better to have your favourite sport and do exercise twice or three times a week. Don’t take a bus if you can go there on foot. I also advise you to have enough sleep. You can listen to music before you go to bed. But don’t play computer games or watch TV. It’s important to be happy every day.

If you can follow my advice, I am sure you can be in good health. Thanks for listening.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。所給材料內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，層次清楚，我們要做的就是用英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，深入挖掘題材內(nèi)涵，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文時(shí)要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題，同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn): 這篇短文涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上使用多種句式，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。同時(shí)，文章還使用了一些常用的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：You should…、You can…、It’s better to…、以及祈使句、條件句的使用，這為文章增色不少。