Question

【題目】寫作

健康對每個人都非常重要，但許多中學生對此缺乏認識，為了讓你的同學更多的了解這方面的知識，請根據(jù)圖示，以“How can we keep healthy?”為題寫一篇短文。

要求：1．表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；

2．必須包括所有相關信息，展開想象，

適當發(fā)揮；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右, 開頭已給出,

不計入總詞數(shù)；

4．不得使用真實姓名和校名等。

How can we keep healthy?

Good health is very important for everyone, but most of us don’t know how to keep fit.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How can we keep healthy?

Good health is very important for everyone, but most of us don’t know how to keep fit. How can we keep healthy? Now there is some advice we can follow. First, we should have a healthy diet, and we should eat vegetables amd fruit. Second, we should have enough sleep. If we don’t have enough rest, we can’t have class well. Finally, we had better do more exercise, such as taking a walk, running. If we follow these advice, we will keep healthy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹保持健康的方法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：there is..., we should..., If we don’t have...,we had better....等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意根據(jù)提綱提示進行表達。

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了身體健康的重要性，接下來介紹保持健康的方法，最后指出遵循所給建議能保持身體健康。此處keep fit, have a healthy diet, do exercise, take a walk, keep healthy等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。