Question

【題目】書面表達

假設(shè)你是林波，上周五你們學校舉辦了一場運動會。請根據(jù)提示及要求，以“ Our school sports meeting ”為題寫一篇短文，簡單介紹一下你們班參加運動會的情況。

提示：

① 班里大部分同學都參加了運動會，有的擅長跑步，有的擅長跳高、跳遠；

② 好朋友Alice在跳遠比賽中奪冠，并打破了校紀錄；

③ Jack在400米賽跑比賽中得了第二名，比冠軍只慢了三秒。

要求：

① 字跡工整，層次清晰；

② 語句通順，語法正確；

③ 不少于70詞(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

Our school sports meeting

Hi! My name is Lin Bo. Last Friday, our school held a sports meeting. _____________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school sports meeting

Hi! My name is Lin Bo. Last Friday, our school held a sports meeting. Most of my classmates took part in it and

they had great fun. Some of them were good at running and some did well in the long jump and the high jump. My best friend Alice won first place in the long jump. She jumped much farther than any other student in our school

and broke the school record. I’m proud of her !

In the 400 -meter race ,Jack wanted to get first place but he failed .He was only three seconds slower than the winner. But he said that he would try again next time .

【解析】

試題分析：短文敘述的是上周五學校舉辦了一場運動會的情況，所以句子用一般過去時，要注意不要遺漏要點，要使用高級詞匯，所寫的句子要符合英語語法，要注意上文的銜接。

寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：hold a sports meeting召開運動會；take part in參加；be good at擅長；be proud of以……為自豪；break the school record打破學校記錄。用了that引導的賓語從句。增加了文章的亮點。