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11．下面是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生愛好調(diào)查表．請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀，先描述該調(diào)查的結(jié)果，然后選擇其中兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)，說明贊成或不贊成的原因．單詞數(shù)在80-100之間．

Hobbies	Agree	Disagree
Surfing the Internet	36	14
Eating snacks	25	25
Favorite singers/movie stars	10	40

注意：1、文章的開頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
      2、所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的至少兩項(xiàng)并且發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)，說明理由；
      3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名．
參考詞匯：in my opinion，intellectual and educated，admire，disagree
We did a survey about middle school students'hobbies among 50students．Here are the results．
First，mostofstudentsagreetosurftheInternet．Asforeatingsuacks，studentsaredividedintotwoparts．Halfagree，andhalfdisagree．What'smore，almostallthestudentsdisagreetoadmiresingers
andmoviestars．Onlyafewpeoplelikethishobby．
Inmyopinion，Idon'tthinkeatingsnacksisbadforourhealth．Forinstance，Wecaneatsomewhenwearehungry．BesidesIdisagreetoadmiresingersormoviestarstoo，becausetheyareonlysomefashionpeopleinsingingoracting．AnotherreasonisthatIpreferpeoplewhoareintellectualandeducated．
Thesearemypersonalopinios．Ithinkwe'dbetterspendmoretimeonusefulthings．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是描述對(duì)中學(xué)生的愛好的調(diào)查結(jié)果，然后選擇其中兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容發(fā)表你自己的觀點(diǎn)，說明贊成或不贊成的原因．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．調(diào)查結(jié)果；上網(wǎng)：36人同意，14人不同意；吃零食：各占一半；最喜歡歌手明星：10人同意，40人不同意
2．自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由；

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
what's more 再者
be bad for 對(duì)…不利
for instance 例如
had better do sth 最好做某事
spend+時(shí)間+on sth 花時(shí)間做某事
【高分句型】
1．①What's more，almost all the students ②disagree to admire singers and movie stars．
①what's more 再者
②disagree to do sth 不同意做某事
2．①In my opinion，I don't think②③eating snacks is bad for our health．
①in my opinion 依我看來
②think后是省略了that 的賓語從句．
③動(dòng)名詞短語做主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．be bad for 對(duì)…不利
3．Another reason is ①that I prefer people②who are intellectual and educated．
①that引導(dǎo)的從句作為表語，和is構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，who作為從句的主語，修飾先行詞people．

解答 We did a survey about middle school students'hobbies among 50 students．Here are the results．First，most of students agree to surf the Internet．As for eating suacks，students are divided into two parts．Half agree，and half disagree．What's more，almost all the students disagree to admire singers and movie stars．【高分句型】Only a few people like this hobby．（調(diào)查結(jié)果）
In my opinion，I don't think eating snacks is bad for our health．【高分句型】For instance，We can eat some when we are hungry．Besides I disagree to admire singers or movie stars too，because they are only some fashion people in singing or acting．Another reason is that I prefer people who are intellectual and educated．【高分句型】（針對(duì)吃零食和喜歡明星發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由）
These are my personal opinios．I think we'd better spend more time on useful things．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤．