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《后羿射日》是一個(gè)古老的神話傳說。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文，簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下這個(gè)故事。

提示：1. 從前，天上只有一個(gè)太陽，人們生活得很幸福。

2. 突然有一天，天上出現(xiàn)了10個(gè)太陽。氣候是如此得熱以至于莊稼干枯，動(dòng)物死亡。人們生活得很是艱難。

3. 有一個(gè)英雄叫后羿。他擅長(zhǎng)射箭。于是，人們就請(qǐng)求他把多余的九個(gè)太陽射下來。

4. 于是，后羿登上海邊的一座高山，射掉了九個(gè)太陽。

5. 人們非常感謝后羿。后來他娶了嫦娥，過上了幸福的生活。

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Answer 1

【答案】Once upon a time, there was only a sun in the sky and people had a happy life. But one day ten suns appeared in the sky. The weather was so hot that all the crops and many animals died. People had a hard life.

There was a young man. His name was Hou Yi. He was good at shooting. So people asked him to shoot nine suns. So he climbed the high mountain beside the sea. He tried to shoot nine suns. Again, there was only a sun in the sky and people were very glad.

At last, Hou Yi married Chang’e and they lived happily.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹《后羿射日》這個(gè)故事。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：there was……，The weather was……，So people asked him to……，He tried to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。