Question

    假如你是比爾，你校試行在課間播放音樂，你班的同學(xué)對此進(jìn)行了討論。請你根據(jù)表格中所提供的信息，用英語給你們的校長寫一封信，介紹大家的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

要求:詞數(shù)90詞左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不 計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Dear headmaster,

    We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break.All the students in our class gave the ideas. 

                      Yours sincerely,

                            Bill

Answer 1

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[寫作提示]

1. 審題:本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的書信。主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：

(1) 贊同課間播放音樂的原因(根據(jù)表格內(nèi)提供的要點(diǎn)寫) ；

(2) 反對課間播放音樂的原因(根據(jù)表格內(nèi)提供的要點(diǎn)寫) ；

(3) 你的觀點(diǎn)(1 一2個(gè)) 。

[參考范文]

Dear headmaster,

    We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class save the ideas.

    Most of the students agree music should be played.They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides,music helps them relax after hard study.What's more,music can help them improve study efficiency.

    On the other hand,some students disagree.They think they cannot get the expected results by listening to music,as the break is short. What's more,in class some students are still lost in the music,which has a bad effect on study.

    I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by the music.So I don't like the music.

    Hope to hear from you soon.

                      Yours sincerely；

                            Bill