Question

13．上了八年級，作業(yè)比以前多了，考試比以前難，壓力很大，最好的放松的方式就是旅游．請你圍繞旅游的話題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，開頭句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．旅游的原因．（至少一點(diǎn)）
2．在剛過去的國慶節(jié)（National Day），你去了哪里旅游？和誰一起去的？做了什么事情？
3．你去的地方和我們的城市汕頭有什么不同之處（至少三點(diǎn)不同之處，使用比較級）？
4．最后說說你的寒假的計(jì)劃．
How time flies!Now we are in Grade 8，we havemore homework and the tests are more difficult．Sowefeel more stressed out than before．To relax ourselves，it's best to go on vacation．
On National Day I went to Hong Kong with my parents．We visited museums and parks．Hong Kong is as beautiful as our city．However，there are some differences between the two cities．For example，the streets in Hong Kong are much cleaner and quieter than ours．And there are more beautiful buildings in Hong Kong and they are taller than those in our city．Besides，the things in Hong Kong are more expensive．
We enjoyed ourselves during our vacation．So this winter vacation，I plan to go somewhere exciting．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To relax ourselves，it's best to go on vacation．
不定式"To relax ourselves"在句中做目的狀語，"it's best to go on vacation"使用的句式為"it is+形容詞+to do sth"．這句話意為：為了放松，最好去度假．
高分句型二：
Hong Kong is as beautiful as our city．
句中使用了形容詞、副詞的原級比較"as…as…"結(jié)構(gòu)，首個(gè)as后用形容詞、副詞的原級．這句話意為：香港跟我們的城市一樣漂亮．

解答 How time flies!Now we are in Grade 8，we have more homework and the tests are more difficult．So we feel more stressed out than before．To relax ourselves，it's best to go on vacation．【高分句型一】（旅行的原因）
On National Day I went to Hong Kong with my parents．We visited museums and parks．（旅行經(jīng)歷）Hong Kong is as beautiful as our city．【高分句型二】However，there are some differences between the two cities．For example，the streets in Hong Kong are much cleaner and quieter than ours．And there are more beautiful buildings in Hong Kong and they are taller than those in our city．Besides，the things in Hong Kong are more expensive．（旅行地和汕頭的不同）
We enjoyed ourselves during our vacation．So this winter vacation，I plan to go somewhere exciting．（寒假計(jì)劃）

點(diǎn)評 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語意通暢．