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2．邁克（Mike）過去英語成績不太好，課堂上聽不懂老師講的、不會(huì)發(fā)音、不會(huì)語法、愛睡覺、不交作業(yè)…他甚至想放棄英語．但在老師和同學(xué)的幫助下，他下決心努力學(xué)習(xí)．現(xiàn)在他變化了很多，并且成了班上英語成績優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生．請根據(jù)下表和提示詞，以 Never give up 為題寫一篇70-90詞的短文．號召大家不要輕言放棄，要變問題為挑戰(zhàn)，勇敢面對．
提示詞：used to；  hand in；  now；  with the help of；  decide；  work hard at；

in the past	How	now
poor in English can't… don't…	learn by…	top student

要求：1．語言流暢，規(guī)范；
2．包含提示內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.80 詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
He thought it was too difficult to hand in the homework．
句中"it was too difficult to hand in the homework"為賓語從句，使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"結(jié)構(gòu)．這句話意為：他認(rèn)為它太難了，不能送交作業(yè)．
高分句型二：
If he has problem，he will ask the teacher for help．
句中"If he has problem"為條件狀語從句，遵循"主將從現(xiàn)"原則．句中短語有"ask sb　for　help　向某人尋求幫助"．這句話意為：如果他有問題，他會(huì)向老師尋求幫助．

解答 Never give up 
Mike used to be poor in English．He can't understood what the teacher said．He didn't know not only the pronunciation but also the grammer．He usually slept in English class．He thought it was too difficult to hand in the homework．【高分句型一】He even wanted to give up．（過去的情況）
With the help of his teacher and classmates，he decided to study hard at English．He listens to the teacher carefully．After class，he does his homework．He reads English every morning．If he has problem，he will ask the teacher for help．【高分句型二】Now，he has become one of the top students．（現(xiàn)在的情況）
It shows that we should never give up，no matter what difficulty we meet．We should change the problems into challenges and face them bravely．（我的感想）

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