Question

【題目】書面表達

根據(jù)下面的信息，寫一篇短文描述Tom日常生活中的好習慣和壞習慣。

要求 1. 必須包含以下所有信息。

2. 字數(shù)60字以上。

3. 字跡清楚，認真。

1.鍛煉(every day )

2. read books (每天)

3. 吃水果和蔬菜(four or six times a week )

4. eat junk food ( every day)

5. stay up late (經(jīng)常)

6. sleep (less than eight hours every day)

7.使用英特網(wǎng) (over two hours a day)

8.go to the dentist (never)

9. help with housework (hardly ever)

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Tom is a middle student now. He exercises every day. It is good for his health. He also reads books every day. He likes reading very much. He eats fruits and vegetables four or six times a week. But he has bad habits. He eats junk food every day. He often stays up late. So he sleeps less than eight hours every day. He hardly ever does housework at home. He surfs the Internet for over two hours a day. He never goes to the dentist. It is bad for his health.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構思好文章的結構，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達準確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當使用一些連接詞來加強文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結構清晰完整，表達準確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達方式如But he has bad habits. He hardly does housework at home. He surfs the Internet for over two hours a day.等等。