Question

【題目】假如你是廣州青年志愿者協(xié)會的成員,請根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示,向同班同學(xué)介紹一下協(xié)會的情況,并號召更多同學(xué)加入?yún)f(xié)會。

參加條件:1.有耐心去照顧別人; 2.能很好地和別人溝通

活動:1.去孤兒院教孩子們唱歌; 2....《自由發(fā)揮)

意義: ..(自由發(fā)揮)

孤兒院:orphanage

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80個左右(文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù));

2.不得透露學(xué)校,姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分。

As a member of Guangzhou Young Volunteers Association, it's my honor to give an introduction of it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】As a member of Guangzhou Young Volunteers Association, it’s my honor to give an introduction of it.

Volunteers in this organization help people in need in Guangzhou. If you are patient enough to care for others, you can join us. Besides, it’s important to have the ability to communicate with others well.

In this association, you can take part in many meaningful activities. For example, you can go to the orphanage to teach the children to sing songs. This can bring them joy and peace. What’s more, you can visit the nursing home. The elderly/aged there need to be taken good care of. You can tell them stories and chat with them.

By joining Guangzhou Young Volunteers Association, I learn responsibility and how to care for others. If you like doing voluntary work, why not join us?

【解析】

本篇作文是一篇號召，通過介紹自己的協(xié)會，號召更多的同學(xué)加入。材料給出了比較多的參考信息，參加條件是什么，都舉辦了什么活動，這些是有參考依據(jù)的，還有一部分需要自由發(fā)揮的內(nèi)容，例如還有什么活動，和參加協(xié)會的意義，這些需要學(xué)生結(jié)合自身的實(shí)際情況，進(jìn)行自由發(fā)揮。

首先說出參加協(xié)會的條件，1.有耐心去照顧別人； 2.能很好地和別人溝通，兩個條件之間用連詞besides連接，使句子更加通順。然后介紹協(xié)會的活動，利用詞組For example,引出下文內(nèi)容，給孩子們唱歌，這會給他們帶來歡樂和和平；用What’s more連接，說出第二件事情，給他們講故事或聊天。最后，總結(jié)參加協(xié)會帶給自己的意義，不僅學(xué)到了責(zé)任感，而且也學(xué)會了照顧別人。呼吁大家加入。