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6．你準(zhǔn)備寫一份倡議書，鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參與"光盤行動(dòng)"（clear your plate）．
要求：
1．內(nèi)容主要包括三個(gè)方面．

現(xiàn)在我們部分同學(xué)的不良習(xí)慣	1．買很多零食； 2．不餓時(shí)也吃很多零食； 3．不喜歡吃的，吃不掉的就扔掉．
害處	1．浪費(fèi)了很多事物； 2．不利于身體健康．
你的倡議	1．吃飯時(shí)，不點(diǎn)過量的食物； 2．盡量"光盤"，吃不掉的打包帶回家； 3．不吃或少吃零食； 4．其他倡議…（不少于兩點(diǎn)）

2．字?jǐn)?shù)110個(gè)單詞左右．文章的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．
Dear friends，
Please join in"Clear your plate"campaign．
Now，some of us students like buying a lot of snacks． They eat a lot even if they were not hungry．If they don't like the food，or they can't eat up the food，they will throw it away．
It is really a bad thing．We have wasted lot of food．And at the same time，it is bad for the students'health．
So boys and girls，let's change our habit．When we have dinners in restaurants，don't order too much food．And try to eat up all the food we ordered．If we can't eat up all o f them，just pack them and bring them back home to eat．Please give up the snacks between meals．Encourage your classmates and parents to join us．If you find somebody is throwing away food，just stop them．
Come on，dear friends．Let's start from ourselves．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是寫一份倡議書，鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參與"光盤行動(dòng)"．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．現(xiàn)在我們部分同學(xué)的不良習(xí)慣；買很多零食；不餓時(shí)也吃很多零食；不喜歡吃的，吃不掉的就扔掉．
2．害處；浪費(fèi)了很多事物；不利于身體健康．
3．你的倡議；吃飯時(shí)，不點(diǎn)過量的食物；盡量"光盤"，吃不掉的打包帶回家；不吃或少吃零食；其他倡議…（不少于兩點(diǎn)）
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
even if 即使
eat up 吃光
be bad for 對(duì)…不利
throw away 扔掉
give up 放棄
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵(lì)某人去做某事

【高分句型】
1．They eat a lot even if they were not hungry．
even if即使，引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．
2．When we have dinners in restaurants，don't order too much food．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
3．①If we can't②eat up all of them，just pack them and ③bring them back home to eat．
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
②eat up 吃光
③bring back 帶回去．動(dòng)詞不定式to eat 作為目的狀語．

解答 Dear friends，
Please join in"Clear your plate"campaign．
Now，some of us students like buying a lot of snacks．They eat a lot even if they were not hungry．【高分句型】If they don't like the food，or they can't eat up the food，they will throw it away．（現(xiàn)在我們部分同學(xué)的不良習(xí)慣）
It is really a bad thing．We have wasted lot of food．And at the same time，it is bad for the students'health．（害處）
So boys and girls，let's change our habit．When we have dinners in restaurants，don't order too much food．【高分句型】And try to eat up all the food we ordered．If we can't eat up all of them，just pack them and bring them back home to eat．【高分句型】Please give up the snacks between meals．Encourage your classmates and parents to join us．If you find somebody is throwing away food，just stop them．（你的倡議）
Come on，dear friends．Let's start with ourselves．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)．要求介紹．同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．