Question

1．父親節(jié)即將來臨，學(xué)校廣播室正在開展有關(guān)"父子（女）親情"的征文活動．假如你叫李華（LiHua），下列三幅圖片描述的是你和父親之間發(fā)生的一件往事，請你根據(jù)圖片及所給文字提示，展開合理想象，寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀悻F(xiàn)在對此事的感想．要求：
1．語句通順，行文連貫，書寫整潔；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)約70-80詞；
3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)． 提示詞：ask sb．for sth．，tell sb．to do sth．，net bar，think of，feel sorry
Father's Day is coming．I'm going to tell a story between my father and me．One day
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                                                                    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫作文．內(nèi)容是根據(jù)圖畫描述你和父親之間發(fā)生的一件往事并談?wù)勀悻F(xiàn)在對此事的感想．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．描述圖畫；找爸爸要錢騙爸爸說買書，爸爸讓我努力學(xué)習(xí)，我拿了錢去了網(wǎng)吧
2．感想；
 
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
ask sb for sth 找某人要某物
study hard 努力學(xué)習(xí)
not …at all 一點(diǎn)也不
from then on 從那時起
【高分句型】
1．He asked me what I wanted to do．
what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，作為ask的賓語．
2．Instead I went to the Youth Net Bar and played computer games there．
instead代替，常放句首或句末．
3．My father scolded me when he heard this．
when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．

解答 Father's Day is coming．I'm going to tell a story between my father and me．One day I asked my father for some money．He asked me what I wanted to do．【高分句型】I said I wanted to buy some books．Then he gave me some．He told me to read more books and study hard at school．But I didn't buy any books at all．Instead I went to the Youth Net Bar and played computer games there．【高分句型】（描述圖畫）My father scolded me when he heard this．【高分句型】And I felt very sorry about it．From then on I haven't been to the Net Bar any more．（感想）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇圖畫作文，本題材料是三幅圖畫．動筆前應(yīng)認(rèn)真看圖，了解圖畫內(nèi)容，展開合理想象．然后根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題．此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題．寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤．