Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

人類只有一個地球。根據(jù)提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

提示: 1.如何保護(hù)環(huán)境已成為世界最大難題之一；

2.各種污染破壞環(huán)境，損害健康；

3.不要亂倒垃圾，亂排廢水；

4.我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)環(huán)境，使我們的家園更加美麗。

Answer 1

【答案】

Saving the Earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world. There are many kinds of pollutions around us, such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and light pollution. We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health. So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. Some factories pour waste water into the rivers and the lakes. The behavior of these factories will pollute the water, and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them.

We have only one earth. We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world. There are many kinds of pollutions around us, such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and light pollution.等等。