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15．假設(shè)你是李華，上個(gè)暑假你和家人來到北京游玩，根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，給你的朋友Mary寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹你游覽北京的經(jīng)歷及游玩的感受．
內(nèi)容如下：
1．北京在中國的北方，是中國的首都，有很多名勝古跡，每年有很多人到北京旅游．
2．你已經(jīng)來過北京多次，做過了很多事情．你爬過長城，到過頤和園但沒有參觀故宮．
3．你看了京��；吃了北京烤鴨；拜訪了北京的朋友；在北京買過很多禮物．
4．你拍了很多照片，與外國人用英語交談過．
5．雖然很累，但是很開心．
參考詞匯：in the north of…，places of interest，climb the Great Wall，visit the Summer Palace，the Palace Museum，see the Beijing Opera，eat Beijign duck，take photos，comunicate with…
要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，70詞左右；
 2．根據(jù)提示選擇恰當(dāng)時(shí)態(tài)；
 3．開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好（見答題卡）．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
There are many places of interest there．那里有很多名勝．
place of interest名勝
【高分句型二】
I had a good time there．我在那里玩得開心．
have a good time 玩得開心

解答 Dear Mary，
    Last summer holiday，I went on a trip to Beijing with my family．
Beijing is the capital of China and it is in the north of China．There are many places of interest there．【高分句型一】A lot of people come to visit Beijing every year．（北京在中國的北方，是中國的首都，有很多名勝古跡，每年有很多人到北京旅游．）I have been to Beijing many times．I have done many things there．For example，I have climbed the Great Wall．I have visited the Summer Palace but I haven't visited the Palace Museum．（你已經(jīng)來過北京多次，做過了很多事情．你爬過長城，到過頤和園但沒有參觀故宮．）I have also seen the Beijing opera and eaten Beijing duck．I have visited my friends in Beijing and I have had some presents for my friends．（你看了京��；吃了北京烤鴨；拜訪了北京的朋友；在北京買過很多禮物．）I have also had conversation with foreigners and I have taken lots of photos．（你拍了很多照片，與外國人用英語交談過）I felt tired but very happy．（雖然很累，但是很開心．）It was an interesting experience．I had a good time there．【高分句型二】
What about your last summer holiday？
                                                                Best wishes!
                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤．