Question

【題目】“美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來(lái)，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見(jiàn)。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來(lái)。

要求：

1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

2.必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?/span>

3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右，（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.

As junior high students,

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Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.

Answer 1

【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.

As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.

Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.

【解析】

瓊海正在進(jìn)行“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來(lái)。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫(xiě)作的提綱。通過(guò)審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來(lái)敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱we來(lái)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見(jiàn)的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢。