Question

【題目】 書面表達(dá)

假如你是Tom，認(rèn)識(shí)了位新朋友Alan。這是Alan的個(gè)人資料，請根據(jù)下面的資料寫一封電子郵件，把他介紹給你的朋友Peter。

要求：1. 必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息。

2. 詞數(shù)：不少于60字。

Name	Alan Brown
Age	14
Birthday	August 15th
QQ number	118574263
Family members	Father ,mother, a sister
Favorite(最愛)	Food: fish sport: basketball
School activities	1.A book sale (Oct,8th)
	2.A school trip (Dec. 14th)

Dear Peter，

I have a new friend.

I hope you like him, too.

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Peter，

I have a new friend.His name is Alan Brown. He is fourteen years old. His birthday is on August 15th. His QQ number is 118574263. There are four people in his family, his father, his mother ,his sister and him. His favorite food is fish. He likes playing sports, and he often goes swimming. There will be two school activities this term in his school. A book sale will be on October 8th. They will have a school trip on December 14th. Alan is an outgoing boy. I like to talk with him. I hope that you like him, too.

Tom

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，介紹我的新朋友Alan Brown。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：His name is…,He is ...,There are...,He likes ...,They will have ..., I hope that you...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意主謂一致。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹她的個(gè)人情況年齡、生日、QQ號，家人，愛好，最后介紹學(xué)校的活動(dòng)以及我喜歡和他交談。此處like doing sth, play sports, go swimming, a book sale, have a school trip, talk with等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。