Question

【題目】假如你是Tina，你的筆友Gary想要去月球旅行，向你詢問應(yīng)該如何準備行囊，請你根據(jù)下列表格提示給他提幾點建議，并以信件的形式給他回復(fù)�？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不少于60詞(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

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原因	建議
月球晚上溫度低	多帶點厚衣服
月球上沒有食物和水	帶足夠的食物和水
……	……

Dear Gary,

I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m happy for you about that.

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Yours,

Tina

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Gary,

I hear that you are going to travel to the Moon. I’m happy for you about that.

I know something about the Moon and I would like to give you some advice. Firstly, it’s cold on the Moon at night. You should take some warm clothes. Secondly, there is no water or food on the Moon, so you must take enough water and food for yourself. Thirdly, there is little gravity on the Moon, so you’d better wear special clothes to protect yourself. Last, don’t forget to take your camera. Then you can take some special pictures.

Have a nice trip!

Yours,

Tina

【解析】

這是一篇表格作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下去月球旅行應(yīng)該如何準備行囊。所提供的材料中列舉了去的原因和建議。主要從月球晚上溫度低、月球上沒有食物和水等幾個方面去介紹。在作文中要適當(dāng)加入你的建議，包括多帶點厚衣服、帶足夠的食物和水。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱和第二人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

I know something about the Moon and I would like to give you some advice. 我知道一些關(guān)于月亮的事情，我想給你一些建議。這句話是由and 連接的并列句。

【高分句型二】

Thirdly, there is little gravity on the Moon, so you’d better wear special clothes to protect yourself. 第三，月球上幾乎沒有重力，所以你最好穿特別的衣服來保護自己。so you’d better wear special clothes to protect yourself. 表示原因的句子。