Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

Alan正在澳大利亞旅游。如果你是他，請(qǐng)你給好友Dick寄上一張照片并寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他你在哪里；在做什么；那里的天氣怎樣；照片上的人都在做什么；你的感受如何。（詞數(shù)：60左右，照片上的信息都要在信中寫(xiě)出來(lái)）

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Dick，

How is your summer going?

I am traveling in Australia．Here is a photo．My mother is sitting on a high chair．She is wearing a pair of sunglasses．It's sunny, but not hot．In the photo, my father is sitting in a chair．You can see a boy swimming in the sea．He is my brother．You can also see my sister and me．We're playing soccer on the beach．We are happy．I like this place, and I hope to stay here for a month or two．I hope to hear from you soon．

Yours,

Alan

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文，Alan寫(xiě)信給Dick,介紹他們?cè)诎拇罄麃喌穆眯�，并介紹在那里拍的照片里的情況。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為單數(shù)第一，三人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am...，My mother is...，You can see...，We are...，and I hope to...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹自己在澳大利亞旅行，接下來(lái)介紹照片里家人正在做什么，最后希望早日收到Dick的回信。此處a pair of, see sb doing sth, play soccer, on the beach, hope to do sth, hear from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。