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假設(shè)你叫林洋，收到了你的筆友Susan的一封信，請(qǐng)你給她寫一封回信。在信中回答她的問題，提出你的建議，并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />Dear Lin Yang,
I have a problem these days. My mother doesn’t allow me to watch TV even on weekends. She says as a middle school student, my job is to study. After I finish my homework, she says, I should read books and watching TV is bad for me. But I think I need a rest and watching TV helps me learn a lot too.
Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my mother’s decision? What should I do?
Yours,
Susan

Answer 1

One possible version:
I don’t have this problem. My mother allows me to watch TV after I have finished my homework.
I think your mother shouldn’t do like this. As a student, study is our main job, but it is not all of our life. We also need a rest and enjoy ourselves. Watching TV is a good way for us to relax. Besides, some TV programs are good for our study.
I think you should talk about it with your mum. Look for some information on the Internet to help you. You can also ask your father for help.

試題分析：本文的寫作首先表明自己有沒有這方面的問題，如沒有可以開門見山的切入主題I don’t have this problem.然后對(duì)他媽媽的做法自己表示并不贊同，并陳述理由，學(xué)習(xí)并不是生活的全部study is our main job, but it is not all of our life.看電視也是對(duì)于我們放松是非常好的方法Watching TV is a good way for us to relax.同時(shí)一些電視節(jié)目對(duì)我們的學(xué)習(xí)幫助也是非常大的some TV programs are good for our study.最后表明自己的看法和建議，如多和媽媽進(jìn)行溝通you should talk about it with your mum.或者向爸爸尋求理解和幫助You can also ask your father for understanding and help.
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