Question

16．一方有難，八方支援．同學(xué)們，讀完上面的報(bào)道后，你有何感想？你是否也想為災(zāi)區(qū)的人做點(diǎn)力所能及的事情？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給信息，寫一篇短文．內(nèi)容包括：
1、看到報(bào)道后你的感想？2、你會(huì)怎么樣幫助災(zāi)區(qū)人們？
3、平時(shí)你在學(xué)校是怎樣幫助同學(xué)的（至少2點(diǎn)）4、呼吁同學(xué)們要互相幫助．
要求：語句通順合理，80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
I have just read a report about the disaster（災(zāi)難）which happened in Yunnan．
                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope they can go on their study我希望他們能繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)．
hope后是省略了that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
I often help the classmates who are weak in English我總是幫助那些英語差的學(xué)生．
who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾classmates．

解答 I have just read a report about the disaster（災(zāi)難） which happened in Yunnan．I am very moved that people all over China are giving a hand to the people there（感想）．I will give away all my pocket money to the children．I hope they can go on their study．【高分句型一】（會(huì)怎么樣幫助災(zāi)區(qū)人們）At school，I often help the classmates who are weak in English．【高分句型二】Besides，when my classmate is ill，I hope to look after him/her．Helping others makes me happy．（平時(shí)你在學(xué)校是怎樣幫助同學(xué)的）I think if we try our best to help the people in trouble，the world will become more beautiful．So，let's help each other．（呼吁同學(xué)們要互相幫助．）

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