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【題目】書面表達(dá)

描述你星期天經(jīng)常是如何度過的。以“My Sunday”為題寫一篇60-80字左右的短文。參照已給的詞組：get up, have breakfast., go shopping by bike/on foot, have lunch, have a short break, do one’s homework, play basketball, have supper, watch TV, read story books, go to bed

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Answer 1

【答案】I'm accustomed to getting up at seven o'clock on Sunday morning and then I have breakfast with my parents.From time to time,I go shopping by bike or on foot approximately at 8:30am.I will not return untill it's time to have lunch.I usually do my homework before I have a short break in the afternoon.When the homework is finished,I will go to play basketball with my companions.In the evening ,Having had supper,I watch TV with my family,Last but not the least,I need to read story books before I go to bed so that I can easily fall asleep.

【解析】這篇作文要求我們以My Sunday為題，介紹自己的星期天經(jīng)常是如何度過。題目中給了我們一些詞組，我們可以參照使用。瀏覽這些詞組我們可以看到，這些詞就是從早上起床到晚上睡覺我們這一天中的幾個(gè)時(shí)間節(jié)點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)，我們就可以用這些時(shí)間節(jié)點(diǎn)對自己一天的活動(dòng)進(jìn)行介紹，按照時(shí)間順序描寫，這樣文章也比較有秩序，有條理。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)和漢語習(xí)慣的不同，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，以簡單句的句型為主，如主謂賓或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)。為提升作文檔次，在文章中穿插使用并列句、復(fù)合句以及一些復(fù)雜句式，如非謂語動(dòng)詞等。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使語言生動(dòng)，而不是簡單的記流水賬，這樣也可以使文章的意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。