Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（滿分20分

請以“The Changes to My Hometown”為題。根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文。

十年前	現(xiàn)在
空氣好 山青，水綠 生活貧困 房子矮小 走路、騎自行車進(jìn)城	污染嚴(yán)重 很多高樓大廈 住房寬敞、明亮 乘公共汽車、出租車進(jìn)城 許多人有自己的汽車
希望家鄉(xiāng)更好

要求：語言通順，條理清晰； 基本無語法及拼寫錯誤；80詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

The changes to my hometown

My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. We could hardly see the blue sky. But now, there are many tall buildings in my hometown. The river is clean and the water is clear. There is less pollution than before.

When I was young, the roads were narrow and the transportion conditions were hard. People went to work on foot or by bike. It took a lot of time. As time goes by , those has changed. TaiZouStation andTaiZou Airport have been in use for several years.There are many ring roads People usually go to work by bus or by train even by plane.

It was hard to keep touch with others in the past. But now we can talk on the phone, we can also surf the Internet to send mails or to chat on line. It is very esay.

Now we live a happy life .To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown . I hope my hometown will be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求對比介紹家鄉(xiāng)的過去和現(xiàn)在。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時和過去時態(tài)，注意used to 的應(yīng)用。

寫作亮點：這篇短文要點全,句式應(yīng)用較多例如It was hard to keep touch with others in the past，To keep healthy , many people take an active part in sports等。使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。